Second darkening

the world is a darker place thanks to.. guess!

Saturday, November 12, 2005

and we are just

As the bright light bobs up and down
the river with no end,
i wondered as to when it would cease,
the brutality of it all.
On and on did it go, relentless as ever.
never once did the mighty stop and let the little lamp be.
How dreadful i did wonder, it would be in that position,
only to later realise,
We, like that light, are just lamps in the whirlpool...


5 Comments:

At 8:13 AM, Blogger Sthupit Girl said...

very simple. yet very beautiful.

 
At 2:44 AM, Blogger sharanya said...

why thank you preetika..

 
At 12:58 AM, Blogger Third Eye Closed said...

Wow, thats pretty good.

But i see a few possible places we could apply it, though I really don't know where you meant it to be.

Are you talking about the broken down dog canal which was disowned 6 years after its original master died who was suffering due to claustrophobia especially while wearing a red frock even though he was a male and dislike female dressing, which all started when he was caught in the 3rd grade wearing stockings because he had pee-ed on his socks earlier that day due to the fact that his angry teacher was infected with a viral disease that was originally a base of Motaba which was later copied in the movie "OutBreak" and so on and so forth.

Actually I might be blabbering. lol. Anyways was j/k.

~fEelix
PS: Hey sharanya, I just added another part of the mutty story. If you are feeling seriously jobless, go on.. and take a read. :)

 
At 6:01 AM, Blogger Third Eye Closed said...

Hey thanks Sharanya for reading my blog.
If I have vivid interests like yours, I surely will :)

~fEelix

 
At 8:26 AM, Blogger sharanya said...

LOL

 

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